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Frozen moments

October 24th, 2007 · 5 Comments · Haiku

Tried to capture some moments, in the normal day to day life, in the form of Haiku.

In the bus (1)

I smell their breath
and they, mine;
Jampacked.

In the bus (2)

He yells; She yells;
They all yell;
Chaos.

Nothing personal, just business

24 hour hospital
Please fall sick,
we need business.

Chennai city corp

Dig them; then close them;
Aaah, finished?
Line one, again.

Kid on the road

I wave to her,
she waves back.
sweet innocence.

Struggling to write

Will I ever write,
as naturally
as I breathe?

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5 responses so far ↓

  • 1 Szavanna // Oct 25, 2007 at 6:01 am

    Thanks for telling me about haikus - these are great!

  • 2 vijay // Oct 25, 2007 at 6:11 am

    You’re welcome Anna :-) You should post your Haikus too, they’re great.

  • 3 Szavanna // Oct 25, 2007 at 4:26 pm

    Voila : http://www.szavanna.co.za/?p=429 :)

  • 4 Minal // Nov 30, 2007 at 9:39 am

    nice haikus
    but hey how come u don’t have an about page or something??
    how do we learn something about u ??
    and u don’t even seem to have archives link so i really don’t know how to go over to ur past posts..
    could u help?

  • 5 vijay // Nov 30, 2007 at 9:46 am

    Thank you Minal.

    Hmmm yes, I should add an about page, just feeling lazy, hehe :-)
    There isn’t much in the blog, so no archives. I don’t write regularly, just once in a while :-(

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